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03 January 2011

Spotting an approaching intrusion

A new POV caption that I hope is enjoyed by others

 
Flipped to change angle of POV thanks to
suggestion in comment 7 Jan 11
added by Anne Oni Mouse at 19:14

3 comments:

  1. sasha03 January, 2011 19:22

    POV captions are always nice. It really brings the reader in the story. Great work.

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  2. Good Dump05 January, 2011 16:16

    I would just suggest you flip the image over so the POV is from the busty blond body, not that icky male body...

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  3. Anne Oni Mouse07 January, 2011 22:11

    Thanks for the comment sasha and good point Godd Dump, I will give it a shot now.

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